The Untitled Gabber Story

Allen has a really great way of grabbing your attention and making you wonder what might happen next. There were some overly obvious religious undertones through out the plot of the story; it seemed as though he has a real bent about the subject - and I really wanted to ask, but I chose not to. Allen's use of character dialog made the story easy to read - I would have preferred less fill in sentences and just the dialog. Over all, the story was (while not so much an original idea) possibly a manuscript in the making. His screen play should be interesting.