Josh's Story

Well what can I say? This kid reminds me of Anakin Skywalker from Star Wars; a young prodigy on his way to becoming something grate - even if Anakin did end up being Darth Vader...ha-ha! Josh has a grate vocabulary, but likes to use it way too much. Some of his sentences were a little wordy, but he really commands the page with his imagination. Our first class I took Josh for being a stoner and he probably is, but I think that adds to the magic of his writing ability. Though some of his plot line needs to be worked out, being that it's a little confusing, the story itself is on it's way to being something grate if Josh so chooses to take it that far.