S.O.G.
ok, so in all honesty...Gerald kind of freaks me out a little - but his writing is crazy good! He could work on the presentation of his story line, but the story itself is powerful and needs neither introduction nor explanation. "The Piano trio’s music was tuning up as I began to examine my fresh kill. Small hands roughened by the jungle. Dark almond eyes, now stilled in death that would never see another sunrise. Midnight black hair, its silken strands once long now chopped short. Poking and probing for explosives, I discovered twin mounds passing for breasts that would never nourish an infant. The violins high pitch now searing my brain," (Gerald, p. 2-3).
See....told ya.


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